I like it! Especially 1 3 and 4. I think if there's just a smaalll bit of brushy texture in there it helps make the backgrounds feel a bit more interesting. (Not enough to distract from the background of course)
Awesome, thanks for getting on this so fast. This is a great start, but I agree, some big brushy strokes for texture could be nice. I think the basement shots could use a bit of warmth. Since they're mostly purple-ish, maybe make the light coming down the stairs yellowish. The linework needs a little cleanup. -1. first one is done -2. the second one needs some little wood texture lines and specs(ref the first one), the cabinet, curtains and carpet guidelines need to be cleaned up -3. Clean up the lines on the keg/kegstand and then it's probably fine -4. erase the guideline over the steps. -5. the chair needs cleanup, and I just noticed the bell is tangenting with the wall edge, so can you move that to the left a bit? And don't forget to paint those trees in the very back.
I'll just try to have the lines finished for the next set of backgrounds. Thanks again.
I like it! Especially 1 3 and 4. I think if there's just a smaalll bit of brushy texture in there it helps make the backgrounds feel a bit more interesting. (Not enough to distract from the background of course)
ReplyDeleteCool I can incorporate some texture into them
ReplyDeleteWhich ones are you doing, just so I know where to take over?
ReplyDeleteI can work on 1,3,4 if you like?
DeleteI can do that or you could take these and I'll take the next set. It may make it simpler.
DeleteSure I don't mind taking on this set of pages
DeleteAwesome, thanks for getting on this so fast. This is a great start, but I agree, some big brushy strokes for texture could be nice.
ReplyDeleteI think the basement shots could use a bit of warmth. Since they're mostly purple-ish, maybe make the light coming down the stairs yellowish.
The linework needs a little cleanup.
-1. first one is done
-2. the second one needs some little wood texture lines and specs(ref the first one), the cabinet, curtains and carpet guidelines need to be cleaned up
-3. Clean up the lines on the keg/kegstand and then it's probably fine
-4. erase the guideline over the steps.
-5. the chair needs cleanup, and I just noticed the bell is tangenting with the wall edge, so can you move that to the left a bit? And don't forget to paint those trees in the very back.
I'll just try to have the lines finished for the next set of backgrounds.
Thanks again.
Cool I'll post the pages once I've made all the adjustments
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