It'd be awesome if I could make him churn! Also, the colors are still off, but I suppose I could fix that real quick when you give it to me. I think you're sticking to the storyboards too closely though so the proportions are off. His torso needs more mass, so reference the character sheet. The background could use more detail too, like furniture and stuff. Other than that, you're doing really nice stuff, I like the way you're handling the painting.
also, steven, which parts you want to be able to move! so I can make sure they're on separate layers
ReplyDeleteIt'd be awesome if I could make him churn!
ReplyDeleteAlso, the colors are still off, but I suppose I could fix that real quick when you give it to me.
I think you're sticking to the storyboards too closely though so the proportions are off. His torso needs more mass, so reference the character sheet.
The background could use more detail too, like furniture and stuff.
Other than that, you're doing really nice stuff, I like the way you're handling the painting.
Okay! I'll fix the other page right now and put that up on the server and work on getting this one fixed up :]
ReplyDeletewhats the status on this one? im guessing its not ready to be rigged so ill move on to another one
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